Tuesday, November 13, 2007

THE PASSENGER II

Loved the smell of that cold morning
of October, where the red could be noticed
between the yellow, brown and green of that landscape.

There were some sharpen iced puddles in the way.
Smiled because i was alive.
Some kid cross my steps demanding me:

- STOP!!! otherwise you'll broke the ice under your foot;
- ..And?!-i asked him, without understanding is point.
-Well there's a plant that grows there, so i would like it to grow!
-But i'll have to continue in my way, i can't waste my time-i argued.
-Not this one...PLEASE; This one is special and is mine!

So i did step aside and move forward.... i look back from my shoulder

and realise that there were some older kids that breaking the iced puddle

without any contemplation for the other kid's request;


The next small puddle, that crossed to me, i broke it on purpose.....

The air was cold to get in the loungs the breeze almost freezed my nose

and some leaves were falling.




5 comments:

Max Coutinho said...

Hey G,

This is gorgeous!!! Although it made me feel cold *brrrrr*...
Do you know what I call your stepping aside? Respect. You respected a human being's request, even though it was only a kid.

Now "not this one...PLEASE; this one is special and is mine!" - what a powerful sentence...as if the kid is saying "no, you can't experience this, cause this is mine to try" (I don't know if it makes sense, but the way I see it each and one of us has its own destiny, and path to walk upon...this is extremely relevant)!
The other older kids: disrespect is in the house! *nodding*....typical...

I won't add another word, so that it won't ruin this special post :)!

Another beautiful image :)

Cheers

Max Coutinho said...

Ciao G!

You have been awarded:

http://maxcouti.blogspot.com/2007/11/winning-attittude-true-blue-friend-in.html

Cheers

Max Coutinho said...

Ciao,

I know that it may seem impossible, but you have been awarded, as one of my favourite 2007 blogs :):

http://maxcouti.blogspot.com/2007/12/panoply-of-awards.html

Complimenti!

Merry festivities!!

Anonymous said...

May be I am the only person in the world who leave a comment of a year in the other year...but well, believe it or not I saw it just now...and wanted u to know that it is awsome, fantastic and nice...best of luck for 2008...

Max Coutinho said...

Ciao G!

Thank you so much for having dropped by my blog, I loved it :D!
Hey, I miss reading your thoughts :)!

Anyway, I came to return your "Hi" and I hope everything is well with you :)!

Saluti